Well, as a stand-alone abstract, it's an awesome piece; the tones and details are excellent. So +10 for that.

As a marketing piece, I don't know. I for one can't quite tell what I'm looking at, but maybe I'm just dense. However, if this is just one of many photos in the brochure--photos that are less abstract--then I think it works just fine as a front cover photo. Follow me?

Anyway, good work.

Washing-machine Inside!!! Cool idea....Nice Photo!!! Well done Marzenka!!! Well done.....
Very, very like....

as steven mentioned.. nice tones n details. +awesome compo girl! funkyfunky!
guess the cold feel was enhanced if there were more crisp shapes around. everything's pretty soft and fluid.(might also be the reason for the writing/border to not fit perfectly) ...and the white n blue interact in a pleasing way, like stars which also makes an comfortable impression instead of a cold one imo.
! anyways

You asked about matal..
Its a good image, you need very diffused light really sofy, everything White in the cackground so no reflections or everything black.. but the light has to be really Soft... SOFTBOX etc.. I will drop my washing around later. 10+

i agree with AH...anyway for me the picture works alone, its great

Beautiful abstract, very clean. My ten points to you!

great work

Great abstract !!! Would work for an comersial add ...
/O

There are beautiful things all around us but you have to be able or willing to see them. Great photo

I can not "teach" you but I hope you will "learn" from somebody else who is an expert in the laundry business

Great abstract!

It's a great stand alone abstract. I like the diagonals and repetition of shapes and forms. Excellent technically also. Very well done.. Top marks.
John

nice and clean

wow!!! thats great!! you pulled it off superbly!

To make with a daily thing such a beautiful image requires talent and imagination. +10

I thought this was leather! hehe I really like this photo a lot. You did a wonderful job in my opinion. Nice lighting and composition.

~ Rene

I think youndid a very good work!....Great details and excellent capture of the reflections!!
Carlos

WOW I love it

wow..! wery cool light and colours 9/9

LOL!!! I've never thought of taking that shot!! Love it!

Thank You guys
I wasn't here for so long and i needed to post something different... I'm happy that you like it

Thanks for every comment and esp. thank You guys [Steven/Filip/Brian]
for Your advices

Great work on that one

I really like this, the dark bluey grey makes it look like metallic leather, I know there is no such thing, but it is a great effect.

Cool, but the typography disturbs the image.

Pozdrawjam Marzenka, the photo is already cold, metallic and abstract. And looks very good. But if you want to know the almighty HINT how to shoot the metallic objects, you really need the soft light as ape man mentioned.

If you don't have softbox at your disposal, you can emulate it by simple sheet of tracing paper and direct sunlight. Let the sunrays come through the paper - that will cast typpical clean rectangular shapes on your metallic objects. You can also add piece of polystyrene onto opposite side and use it as reflection board (it's white and not distracting like metallic mylar).

Ideal position is to have reflection board, your metallic object and softbox in one line. Also you shall add black chamois leather to the background to prevent unnecessary reflections.

that is just wonderful! your whole work is amazing ... loved skimming through ur gallery

Ahoj Robert thank you so much for this tips... i have to try it in free time, even if it may be very hard in my extra small bathroom

Thanks again to all of You

Arne - thank you... i've changed font, hope it's better now
DreamShadow - thank You very much (blushed)

I agree with the comments above... this is a great abstract! But since I couldn't tell what it was, I wouldn't use it for the marketing piece.

Ahoj Ahoj! If you have window at your bathroom where sun may come through, you will need only one cubic meter. Ad absurdum you can hold in hands both - the tracing paper and polystyrene board (but don't forget to set up timer at your camera first ).

It sounds crazy, but it's possible. At least I tried it at this shot (and felt very strange when doing it )

Ahh, finally I got what is on the picture. Putting softboxes INTO washing machine isn't possible. Uless you have some spare one you can break up

haha i thought that everybody knows what's on the picture yeah it's washing machine and it's rather hard to do anything inside of it as long as we can't break it up but there in the Laundry Service they have large machines so maybe it will be posible

Thank's again Robert, you're tips are the most welcome

and Allegra - thanks i'm happy you like it, but as i wrote it's just one of this sesion but it won't be in brochure, i love abstract photos, that's why i took it, just for my pleasure

+you're starting to cheat girl... wtf. didn't notice the writing as a fake object for the image the first time i was looking at it. i still say it doesn't fit that perfect, but he.. clever

now could you please visit my gallery and check for pattern6... same problem, same idea how to fix it, it-wont-work-out.
*pum*

really nice abstract
and now you got some great advices to try with

as a marketing piece im not sure thought... but great work

who said washingmachines are no fun was wrong obviously
Great piece.. I dunno how you do it, but you did it again

Fil - Thank's for Your comments, i just pm'd You... hope all is clear now I really appreciate

Jeremy - Yeah i have to try them all... As i said it faster this one isn't part of marketing brochure... it's just one of the photos that i took during this session

Nadia - i'm very happy that you like it... thank you... and how i'm doing it? i look, imagine, then push the button and here it is

very good work, I like it so much.

Keep shooting.

ahaha nice work! The text it's just a little distracting! Colors are very good as well as the contrast!

Coool photo, great presentation.

Excellent Marzenka!
Stunning surreal mood! AWESOME WORK!!!
Cold and Clean you make it! Excellent again!
Top Marks! +10
Beautiful piece! i love the composition.

really good, the color is stunning, this is somewhat abstract... but interesting.

You are Fantastic!
incredible composition, incredible contrast, incredible details.+10

ha ha brilliant, i would have never thought of taking a photo like that, thats where you come into a leauge of your own